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Beach Poem

Cool nights and warm days
Laying out and catching rays
By the pool or beachside
No complaints when outside
Swimming in the sea
Always being carefree
No worries or stress
Just every day being the best
The smell of sunscreen and saltwater lingering
As the moon and stars start twinkling
Starting the next day just the same
As the night begins  to fade away

I used end rhyme, euphony with some cacophony, and imagery.



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  1. Peyton's English 1 BlogMarch 12, 2018 at 10:45 AM

    This is a very good example of imagery. This is because of the great describing words that you used.

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  2. EmmaMarch 14, 2018 at 1:33 PM

    I love the rhyming. I can see this is imagery. Nice job.

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  3. Ellie SMarch 14, 2018 at 6:48 PM

    I really enjoyed your use of rhyme; it tied the coupled lines together nicely! Also, your imagery makes the pictures clear in my head.

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  4. BronwynMarch 15, 2018 at 9:41 AM

    This poem makes we want to visit the beach again. Awesome job of using imagery.

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